Score: 10

"Close to home"

submission: There She Is!! step4

date: September 5, 2008

This the only cartoon on Newgrounds that has ever made me cry.

Congrats on the amazing series and a surprisingly emotional installment.

I look forward to the next part, there's got to be room in Paradise for both of them.

Score: 6

"Nothing special"

submission: Ann Coulter: Brainless

date: June 17, 2006

Unfortunatley the funny parts of this are all lifted directly from an interview with Ann Coulter regarding her book that was on, I believe, CNN.

As far as comedy there's really nothing here other than what I've already seen, granted Ann is frequently funny without intent due to her bizzare logic and lack of self-awareness, but in a cartoon like this I expect to see more than having the actual interviewer replaced by a talking taco and some gratuitous wish-fulfillment violence.

Nice recording quality on the sound, though.

Score: 7

"unnecessary dialogue"

submission: Mario's Jump In (HR)

date: July 29, 2005

nicely done, but the vast majority of the dialogue baloons were completley unnecessary and just served to break the flow of the movie.
Especially with the last one, you could've removed the dialogue "Thank god I had this with me" completley and it still would've been very clear what's going on.

Otherwise good work.